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Entry tags:fanfic100:dom/lij, fic, fic:lotrips
Welcome back, [livejournal.com profile] anatsuno! Fluffy Woodcest threesome just for you. :D

Title: Sharing
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kyuuketsukirui
Fandom: LotRiPS
Pairing: Dom/Elijah/Hannah
Length: ~1100 words
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. 100% not real.
Notes: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] helens78 for the beta.
Summary: Hannah is prone to fits of romanticism.

Dom is the guy Hannah meets at college. Not the only guy, of course, but the one girls dream about in high school. The guy who'll sweep them off their feet when they're on the other side of the country, away from home for the first time in their lives. The One, even. Hannah is prone to fits of romanticism.

Dom is English, but not TV English. He's from Manchester, like Queer as Folk, which she watched with Elijah in one of their DVD marathons. She tells Lij this in all caps and lots of exclamation points over AIM that night, and he smiley-faces back.

The drama department is not strictly on her way to class, but she finds herself passing by it every day just the same. The more she and Dom run into each other, chat, get coffee, the more she's thinking how utterly perfect he is; after a while, she doesn't even notice the off-center chin. Soon enough she's thinking the squashy nose is cute, especially the way it wrinkles up when she lights up. It's cute when he lectures her about smoking and calls her cigarettes fags.

It's when they're having coffee one afternoon - she's skipped class again, having already learned that no one notices if you don't attend lectures - that Dom starts telling her about this massive breakup he had before coming over here. He says it just like that, rolling his eyes a bit at how dramatic he sounds. It wasn't about him leaving or anything; it just happened to coincide.

He's telling her this, and she's nodding along til she realizes quite suddenly he's talking about a guy. There's a pause in the conversation as he sips at his mocha, and instead of saying something comforting or understanding, she says stupidly, "My brother is bi."

Dom cocks his head, "Yeah?" and just goes on as if she hadn't said anything.

What she's thinking is, Have I said anything to make it obvious I was interested? Done anything? Should I pretend I knew he was gay all along? and when he says this guy's name is Orlando, she forces a laugh and says, "Like Disney World."

Thinking back on it, the eyeliner should have tipped her off. Or the black nail polish she thought was just artsy. The quirky fashion sense. Everything screams gay, gay, gay until he says, "Erm, so...I'm available now."

"I'm sorry?" she says, interrupting his "so I..."

He looks down, twisting strips of napkin into a braid, and says, "I just. Wanted to tell you. In case, I mean. If you wanted to go on a proper date."

"Oh." And then, "oh." And finally, grinning like an idiot, "Yeah. I would. Very much."

When summer rolls around, Hannah wonders how she's going to stand to spend the whole vacation away from Dom. So she asks him if he wants to visit her in LA. Casually, of course, because they may have been sleeping together for four months and have a designated table at the little fair trade coffee shop Dom prefers, but the whole meet-the-family freakout is something different altogether.

He says yes without hesitating, says he'd love to meet this brother of hers she can't shut up about, and she blushes and says "shut up" and kicks him in the butt as they walk. This leads, inevitably, to an indignant "oi!" from Dom, and her running away giggling, til he tackles her, tickles her breathless, and frenches the hell out of her on the damp lawn in front of her apartment.

Lij and Dom hit it off immediately, and one night Lij takes the both of them down to the little club he's been DJing at lately. They go back to his place instead of their mom's, drunk and touchy-feely in that almost inappropriate way that's all Hannah lets Lij get away with in public.

His hands are all over Dom, too, one down Dom's front pocket as Lij pretends to look for his key. Hannah imagines his fingers finding something else altogether and the thought sends a surge of warmth straight down to her clit. Dom laughs, squirming away from Lij, but he doesn't seem bothered.

She's never shared Lij with anyone. Never shared Dom with anyone, either, but suddenly it seems the most natural thing in the world.

There's more beer when they get inside, a half-hearted attempt at watching one of the DVDs Lij has out from Netflix. But Dom can't keep his hands off Hannah, and Lij is touching her thigh. It happens without anyone saying anything, some sort of unspoken agreement that has Dom and Lij kissing, each with a hand up her shirt, in her bra, two distinctly different sets of fingers pinching her nipples.

Dom kisses her next, complaining they both taste of cigarettes. Hannah giggles and says, "He's a bad influence," and Lij twists her nipple hard enough to make her gasp.

Someone's hand is down her pants, someone's cock against her thigh. When she wraps her hand around it, the foreskin slides up - Dom's. He reaches across her to unzip Lij's fly as the fingers in her pants, Lij's blunt, nails-chewed-down middle and index fingers find her clit, start rubbing it between them. A literal circle-jerk.

Hannah comes first, bucking against Lij's hand and biting down on Dom's lip. Lij keeps working her, drawing it out til his fingers falter and a breathy "fuck" against her ear tells her he's coming.

They turn on Dom together, pushing him back against the sofa and tugging his jeans down. Lij spits on his fingers, works them into Dom's hole as Hannah jerks him off. He looks like he's in heaven, toes twitching, stretching out as his breathing gets ragged. His cheeks are red above the stubble of his beard, a kissable little line drawn between his brows. He comes over her hand with a yelp when Lij hits his prostate, his eyelashes fluttering, and none of them move for the longest time.

Eventually they drag themselves up, tramp half-naked to Lij's too-small, too-messy bed, and fall in together. Hannah wonders drowsily what Dom will think in the morning, because right now she's imagining the three of them years down the line, her and Dom maybe married, Lij living in their back house, their spare room. These fits of romanticism catch her at the oddest times.


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[identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 06:57 am UTC (link)
omigod i love you. :)

*loves it and petsit and calls it YAY*

A fluffy 'cesty threesome just for me!! It's. STRAPPING. *beams a whole lot*

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 07:10 am UTC (link)
Yay, so glad you like it. :D

This morning, Ces was talking about posting Focus for you, and all of a sudden I was like oh shit, I was going to write fic, too! So then I went to bed, trying to think of a plot, and I was like hmm, what does ana like? And I thought maybe something with het, cause of the whole boobs thing, and then I was like ooh, she likes the Woodcest, and tada, threesome was born. :D I wrote out the first several paragraphs in my head and then couldn't sleep and had to get up and write them.

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[identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 07:13 am UTC (link)
AWW!!! I'm sorry your sleep got gnawed on, but like, SO NOT. :D

HANNAH HAS EVEN LESS BOOBS THAN ME! *steals Lij and Dom away from her yay* *eg*

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[identity profile] capra-maritimus.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 07:55 am UTC (link)
Ooooh! Yummy!!!

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 11:41 am UTC (link)
Thanks. :)

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[identity profile] almostnever.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 11:56 am UTC (link)
Hm... I thought the incest might put me off, but no. I like Hannah's little flight of fantasy at the end.

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 11:58 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :D (And yay for reading it despite reservations.)

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[identity profile] oviaukko.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 01:36 pm UTC (link)
omg.

i so should've read this ages ago. it had me open mouthed and gasping in delight and so very stunned because i never thought this threesome could ...work... this fucking well. *applauds* *goes take cold shower*

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 02:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow, thank you! :D

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-14 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/saura_/
2006-02-15 09:15 am UTC (link)
I have to admit that I'm not very fond of incest... but this fic is amazingly good. It's... NATURAL. The way they all behave, it flows very easily.

I loved this one. REally!!!!

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-15 09:53 am UTC (link)
Wow, thank you! :)

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[identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
2006-02-15 02:26 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm. I liked that a great big lot.

:DDDD

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-15 02:28 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! :D

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[identity profile] absolutefiction.livejournal.com
2006-02-16 06:01 am UTC (link)
wow. that's one of the hottest things i've read in a very long time. *saves to memories*

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-16 06:11 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

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[identity profile] absolutefiction.livejournal.com
2007-07-19 06:43 am UTC (link)
i like it even more after talking to you about incest and woodcest and reading some of your other hannah/lij stuff. and i already loved it completely. ngh.

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2007-07-19 06:46 am UTC (link)
Yay! :D I like it a lot, too.

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[identity profile] absolutefiction.livejournal.com
2007-07-19 06:50 am UTC (link)
it's perfect.

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[identity profile] tomato-n-john.livejournal.com
2006-02-16 07:10 pm UTC (link)
Hm. I never thought about these three together ever before. Now, it's all I'm thinking about.

Though it was intended as a gift for anatsuno, I'm so happy you shared it with all of us.

Beautifuly written.

Tomato

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-16 07:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :)

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[personal profile] msilverstar
2006-02-17 08:26 am UTC (link)
You really nailed (pun intended) the tone. Hannah's totally believable which makes the whole thing plausible. And then, instead of going all schmoopy, the circle jerk and them turning on Dom together works perfectly. A fantastic threesome, yay.

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-02-17 09:29 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Glad it wasn't schmoopy. :D

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[identity profile] tyr-roo.livejournal.com
2006-08-20 12:22 pm UTC (link)
Wow, this is an adorable fic! Well-done, and hot, and literally the best Dom/Lij/Hannah fic I've read, it really works. And I lurve this Hannah, so believable and likable.

(Hello, btw. Linked here thru [livejournal.com profile] woodcest)

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-08-20 12:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I never thought I'd write Woodcest, but now I've written it twice and find I quite like Dom/Lij/Hannah... ^_^;;

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[identity profile] feelforfaith.livejournal.com
2006-09-04 01:58 am UTC (link)
I really like Hannah's voice here. I have no idea what she is like as a person, but I like how you wrote her. Especially with that little bit of romanticism at the end :).

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2006-09-04 02:05 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

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[identity profile] kiltsandlollies.livejournal.com
2007-07-20 01:18 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is just fantastic. Abfic recommended I have a read, and I'm so glad she did. I love the way you've kept Hannah young but not entirely childish, and the way they all tumble in so well. <3

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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com
2007-07-20 01:53 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D

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